S.B.B.A. is a quite famous company in SBS. LOL. But, We need a girl to organize our work! Since, Jim Chen jumped to another group, we thought the whole thing was going to mess up. Is the company going to be alright without a CMO(a.k.a Chief Marketing Officer)? However, Since Jessie joined our company, our work was much more organized than before! This was a good news! Unfortunately, a good news always shows up with a bad news, so, the bad news was, our work were not organized enough. 3 guys came up with a lot of ideas and theyworked so hard to make the ideas came true, but we were a kind of ignored the writings(report).Jessie worked really hard but she could not be able to handle such a large number of writingson her own. The writing part is exactly where we lose all of the mark! Yet the presentation part wealmost got full mark except our commercial was about alcohol(alcohol was not be able to show up in the project). Briefly, we need a girl!!!
PS: We are already over 18, why there shouldn't have any alcohol???!!!
god bless you
ReplyDeleteHm... I can read your entire blog on Google Reader but I can't see it here.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, yes, by far, your group had one of the most powerful presentation. However, as mentioned before the project began, we are marking 160/200 for writing. And when you neglect to prioritize, then there's trouble in the air. =)
You don't need another girl... the boys should be more responsible for their writing part. It's a group project!! The point was to see if EVERYONE can write (not just Jessie).
Alcohol - although you are old enough, it is not something you should be promoting... especially when it was specifically mentioned that your project should not contain: sex, drugs, alcohol, smoking at the very beginning of the project.